雅思大作文 - 犯罪类:是否应该采取更多的行动来预防犯罪
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  今天满分帝同大家分享的是雅思大作文犯罪类话题,各位烤鸭们擦亮眼睛往下看吧!
  1.题目

  Many people are afraid to leave home because of crimes. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crimes, but others feel little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

雅思大作文 - 犯罪类:是否应该采取更多的行动来预防犯罪

  2.题目翻译
  很多人害怕出门,因为他们害怕犯罪。一些人认为我们应该采取更多的行动来预防犯罪,而另外一些人觉得可以做的事不多。双边讨论并给出你的观点。
  3.题目解析
  此题考查的是话题中的犯罪类,考点为如何预防犯罪,常见预防犯罪的手段有:
  1. Deter criminals through stiff sentences
  2.Educate young offenders via vocational training
  3. Increase police patrol and install CCTV
  4. Enhance welfare system
  此题比较难的是第二类人的态度,即要去证明几乎没有措施能够阻止犯罪,1.政府不能保障居民最基本的生活时 2.存在犯罪天性,建议同学们能积累常见犯罪原因及预防犯罪手段。犯罪类的话题在2018年一共考过三场,属于难度较大的话题。
  4.解题思路
  首先这篇文章我们可以采用四段式
  开头段:背景句+话题引出+亮出观点
  正文段一:能够防止犯罪的措施
  正文段二:几乎没有措施能够阻止犯罪的理由
  结尾段:观点+总结至少一个论点
  PS:若论点过多也可展开多个段落
  5.确定论点
  能够防止犯罪的措施:
  1. 政府加强立法,抑制犯罪的发生
  2. 加强道德教育,提高公民的自我保护意识
  3. 政府和媒体需要加强宣传
  几乎没有措施能够阻止犯罪的理由:
  1. 政府不能保障居民最基本的生活时
  2. 存在犯罪天性
  6.范文
  With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.
  Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislations can effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the nature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing moral education contributes to raise people’ safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails, information about laws and legislations are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.
  However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.
  To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering education are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.
  7.范文中的高分句子
  1. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.
  解析:although引导让步状语从句;fully guarantee意为完全保障,尤其注意fully的使用; it is not the reason for which…后接定语从句;surrender to意为向…投降。
  2. Fearing punishment is usually the nature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts.
  解析:fearing punishment为动名词作主语的用法;so表因果关系,平时作文中要稍注意逻辑词的使用;be informed of意为得知,听说;commit crimes意为犯罪;be prone to do sth意为倾向于做某事;anti-social acts意为反社会行为。
  3. As the Internet prevails, information about laws and legislations are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.
  解析:prevail意为流行,盛行;achievable意为做的成的,可完成的;there is a possibility that…后接同位语从句;be given more opportunities to do sth意为有更多的机会做某事;distinguish right from wrong意为明辨是非。
  4. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime.
  解析:be attributed to意为归咎于;the fact that…后接同位语从句;it is less possible for sb to do sth意为对某人来说,做某事是不太可能的;eradicate意为摧毁,完全根除。
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