【雅思大作文】-【犯罪类】有何措施预防犯罪
曲终人散 2018-11-01     18:24 来源: 三立整理
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  今天小编同大家分享的是雅思大作文犯罪类话题,各位烤鸭们擦亮眼睛往下看吧!

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  题目

  Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crimes, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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  题目翻译

  有些人认为有很多措施可以用来预防犯罪,其他人则认为我们什么也做不了。两边讨论,并给出你的观点。

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  题目解析

  此题考查的是话题中的犯罪类,考查的是犯罪中的预防犯罪的手段。提问方式属于常见的第三类,双边讨论给出自己的观点。此题的难点在于第二问的little can be done,建议联系生活的一些恶性犯罪事件,比如:美国各种校园枪击案,西方国家普遍出现这类枪击案;也可以联系一些电影情节以及暴力犯罪类电影里凶手的人物背景,比如这个杀手不太冷、三块广告牌等。最近一次出现是2015年9月3日。有相似题目如下:

  1. Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  2. Unlike in most other countries, police in the UK do not commonly carry guns.Some people think it leaves citizens unprotected. But others think it reduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.

  3. More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introduced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?

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  解题思路

  首先这篇文章我们可以采用四段式或五段式

  开头段:背景句+话题引出+观点

  正文段一:第一类人态度-预防犯罪的措施

  正文段二:第二类人态度-预防犯罪的措施甚微

  结尾段:观点+总结(或将观点单独拎出来写一段)

  Ps:正文段如若论点够多,也可展开2段或多段

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  确定论点

  预防犯罪的措施:

  1. 严惩震慑罪犯

  2. 加强普法教育

  3. 政府和相关媒体加强宣传,提高公民警惕意识

  预防犯罪的措施甚微:

  1. 贫富差距依旧严重且很难消除

  部分人群具有反社会或反人类的人格

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  范文

  Crimes have been a tumor in many parts of the world and there is a debate as to whether they can be prevented or not. Some people are pessimistic about this issue, while other people show optimism, believing that we can take active measures to curb them.

  It seems that crimes cannot be rooted out, as they exist in every country, no matter what efforts we make to crack them down. To eliminate crimes, we should find out and address the underlying causes behind these crimes, but in some cases, there seem to be no good solutions. For example, in some emerging economies, the disparity between rich and poor is widening, which is responsible for various kind of economic and violent crimes. Since the wealth gap cannot be avoided, it would continue to be a cause of crimes for long in these regions. In addition, studies show that a certain percentage of people have anti-social characters due to their genes and growing environment and it is particularly difficult to identify these people and stop them from conducting insane behavior.

  However, admitting the hardships in fighting against crimes does not mean that there is nothing we can do. On the contrary, there are many measures that are effective in reducing crimes. To begin with, strict punishment can be imposed to deal with serious crimes, so as to deter those who intend to perpetrate wrongdoings. Also, as many crimes are committed by people who lack the awareness of law, or fail to earn a living, we should provide education for prisoners and teach them practical skills during their imprisonment, which has proved to be effective in reducing recidivism. Moreover, if people are more vigilant in their daily lives, some crimes, such as theft, burglary and fraud can be effectively prevented.

  To sum up, to combat crimes is a long-term undertaking that takes the efforts of the whole society. Sometimes the result might be frustrating, but as long as we persist, we are able to improve the security of our society.()

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  范文中的高分句子

  1. Crimes have been a tumor in many parts of the world and there is a debate as to whether they can be prevented or not.

  解析:tumor意为瘤,此处相当于problem;and后接并列句;there be句型属于典型的倒装句;debate意为争论、辩论,注意一定要话题确实引起了争论才能用; as to whether后接宾语从句。

  2. To eliminate crimes, we should find out and address the underlying causes behind these crimes, but in some cases, there seem to be no good solutions.

  解析:eliminate意为减轻、消除,与remove, expel, dismiss等为同义词; find out和address,包括tackle,solve等常用于表明解决问题

  ;underlying意为潜在的.

  3. For example, in some emerging economies, the disparity between rich and poor is widening, which is responsible for various kind of economic and violent crimes.

  解析:emerging economies意为新兴经济体; the disparity between rich and poor意为贫富差距,等同于the gap between haves and have-nots或the gulf between rich and poor; be responsible for是...的原因。

  4. Also, as many crimes are committed by people who lack the awareness of law, or fail to earn a living, we should provide education for prisoners and teach them practical skills during their imprisonment, which has proved to be effective in reducing recidivism.

  解析:as引导原因状语从句,people who lack the awareness of law为定语从句,commit a crime意为犯罪,which has proved to be effective in reducing recidivism为非限制性定语从句;recidivism意为再犯、惯犯。

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