11月3日雅思考试写作真题回顾与解析
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11月3日雅思考试写作真题回顾与解析

hello,今天满分帝同大家回顾下11月3日雅思考试真题,此次话题是犯罪类话题

1题目

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


2题目翻译

数据表明多数罪犯的受教育程度较低。有些人认为降低犯罪率最好的办法就是在监狱中教育罪犯,以帮助他们在出狱后找到工作。你在多大程度上同意还是不同意这个观点?


3题目解析
1. 此题考查的是犯罪类的话题,考查的是降低犯罪率的方法,这是2018年第三次考到犯罪类的题目咯,此题亦是老题翻新考。
2. 题中的难点在于best的限定,此类题目我们在10月22日的推文中对于10月20日的考试真题回顾中重点讲到,也于上周的直播课中重点强调过,同学们平时一定要注意总结和回顾。建议大家学习剑八test3一道类似的题:Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?。

3. 提问方式属于考频最高的第一类-同意或不同意。

4. 有相关题目如下:
一。 Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them, while others think education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

二。 Crime is a big problem all over the world. Some people believe that we can do nothing to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


4解题思路
首先这篇文章我们可以采用五段式
开头段:背景句+话题引出+观点

正文段一:让步部分:教育罪犯从而找到工作是降低犯罪率的手段之一

正文段二:反驳部分:教育罪犯从而找到工作也不一定能降低犯罪率

正文段三:反驳部分:给出更好的降低犯罪率的方法(毕竟监狱中的犯人出现二次犯罪的情况仅仅占了整体犯罪情况的一小部分)

结尾段:观点+总结

Ps:正文段如若论点够多,也可展开2段或多段


5确定论点

教育罪犯从而找到工作是降低犯罪率的手段之一:
1.工作稳定的情况下基本很难出现二次犯罪的情况
教育罪犯从而找到工作不一定能降低犯罪率:
1.教育罪犯亦容易出现高智商犯罪,越挫越勇啊
更好的降低犯罪率的方法(从大范围犯罪的角度谈论):
1. 政府加强监管,如警方加强巡逻、安装闭路电视等2. 媒体和政府加强普法宣传


6范文

Because many inmates in prison do not have formal education and have not ever had a decent job before, it is believed that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them so they can find employment after release. However, there are both good news and bad news about the value of prison education.
There is evidence that educating criminals in prison does work to some extent, for it can help them secure a good job after being set free and return to normal life as soon as possible. In looking across the related statistics, the chances of finding employment are about 10 percent higher among prisoners who have participated in either academic or vocational education programs than those who have not. Education, therefore, remains an important means to ensure that inmates are prepared for the challenges in workplaces.
However, skeptics claim that in practice education behind bars may be more a romantic idea than an effective solution to the growing crime rate. It must be made clear that the point is not against correctional education programs, considering that most criminals are under-educated. Rather, the point is that sometimes prison education produces nothing more than “better-educated criminals,” who may become even more dangerous. These days, the violent crime rate keeps soaring up, which is a clear indication that prison education is not really working well. The value of prison education, therefore, must not be over-exaggerated, though it does improve the prospect of employment for the former prisoners.

To sum up, it pays to educate inmates and prepare them for job opportunities. Whether education in prisons is the best way to reduce crime depends on the way those inmates see the education they receive. Good things often happen, but probably not as often as justice officials hope.(标红为核心论点)


7范文中的高分句子

1. Because many in prison do not have formal education and have not ever had a decent job before, it is believed that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them so they can find employment after release.
解析:because后接原因状语从句,inmate意为罪犯,有prisoner、criminal等同义词,a decent job意为好工作; it is believed that为主语从句;find employment意为找工作。
2. There is evidence that educating criminals in prison does work to some extent, for it can help them secure a good job after being set free and return to normal life as soon as possible.
解析:educating criminals in prison为动名词作主语; for后接原因状语从句;secure a good job意为确保得到好工作,等同于前面提到的a decent job; return to normal life意为重返社会,洗心革面,相当于rehabilitation。
3.  These days, the violent crime rate keeps soaring up, which is a clear indication that prison education is not really working well.
解析:these day意为现在,常用于大作文开头段引出背景句,为插入语的用法; the violent crime rate意为暴力犯罪率; soar up意为猛增;  which后接非限制性定语从句; indication后接同位语从句。
4. Whether education in prisons is the best way to reduce crime depends on the way those inmates see the education they receive.

解析:whether education in prisons is the best way to reduce crime为主语从句; depend on取决于; the way those inmates see the education为定语从句的用法,the education they receive为定语从句的用法


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