【雅思大作文】-【社会】休产假利弊
Sen Ro 2018-10-16     18:07 来源: 原创
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  题目
  In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
  题目翻译
  在许多国家,女性在生产后的一个月会休产假,请问利是否大于弊
  题目解析
  本题是典型的家庭类的题目,属于谈论女性权益的一道题,此类题目相对较为小众,尤其是对于年龄较小的考生,建议平时稍加强积累常见论点。此题上次作为考题出现是2016年2月27日,建议同学们平时对于历史考题也注意积累哦。有相关题目如下:
  1. Men and women employed in full-time jobs have to share evenly household chores and caring for children at home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
  2. Nowadays people becoming parents later in life. Some think it is not a good development for the family and for the country. Why is this happening and what are the possible consequences of that for the family and the society?
  解题思路
  1. 首先这篇文章我们可以采用四段式
  开头段:背景句+话题引出-观点
  正文段一:休产假的利
  正文段二:休产假的弊
  结尾段:观点+总结
  Ps:正文段如若论点够多,也可展开2段或多段
  2.确定论点
  休产假的利:
  1. 产妇需要一定的时间恢复身体
  2. 有助于促进家庭关系的和谐发展,有时间陪伴孩子
  休产假的弊:
  1. 产妇本身的工作竞争力会受到影响
  2. 对公司的人员管理带来影响
  范文
  Being a mother is a milestone for many women in the course of life, which means that the long term nurturing and caring of the unborn babies finally bear fruit. Though I am not a feminist, I suppose it is very necessary for female to take a maternity leave in the wake of delivery.
  Being temporarily off work means the newly mothers can have a time to recover from their delivery. The birth of a baby indicates the painstaking care from his/her mother, which is quite arduous and energy-consuming. With the maternity leave, mothers can enjoy the professional health care in some well-equipped hospitals or be soundly taken care of by their family, guaranteeing that they can recuperate from this strenuous process soon.
  Besides, the maternity leave can also make it possible that father, mother and the newly-born baby share good quality family time. The birth of the baby means the completion of a new family and every member of the family is indispensable during this time. If women are deprived of the maternity leave, not only their babies cannot be taken care of, but also it leaves an emotional isolation, thereby making the family less closely-knit.
  There are, of course, some problems for women to take the maternity leave. The elevation of female status and their competitiveness in workplace render them to be irreplaceable to some extent. Although the maternity leave is not long, it is still likely to bring about the managerial problems to the companies and organizations where they work.
  In conclusion, the disadvantages pale into insignificance when compared with the bright sides of maternity leave. Women are supposed to be given maternity leave and this is beneficial to their family life and personal physical fitness.(标红部分为核心论点)
  范文翻译
  作为母亲是许多女性在生活中的里程碑,这意味着未出生婴儿的长期培育和照顾终于结出硕果。虽然我不是女权主义者,但我认为女性在分娩后休产假是非常必要的。
  暂时休假意味着新妈妈可以有时间从分娩中恢复过来。婴儿的出生表明他/她母亲的精心护理,这是非常艰苦和耗能的。通过产假,母亲可以在一些设备齐全的医院享受专业的医疗保健,或者由家人妥善照顾,保证她们能够很快从这个艰苦的过程中恢复过来。
  此外,产假还可以使父亲,母亲和新生婴儿分享有质量的家庭时间。婴儿的诞生意味着新家庭的完成,在此期间,每个家庭成员都是不可或缺的。如果妇女被剥夺了产假,不仅不能照顾她们的婴儿,而且还会使情感孤立,从而使家庭不那么紧密。
  当然,妇女休产假会有一些问题。女性地位的提升及其在工作场所的竞争力使其在某种程度上具有不可替代性。虽然产假时间不长,但仍有可能给他们工作的公司和组织带来管理问题。
  总之,与产假的优势相比,这些缺点显得微不足道。妇女应享有产假,这有利于她们的家庭生活和个人身体健康。(标红部分为核心论点)
  范文高分句型
  1. Being a mother is a milestone for many women in the course of life, which means that the long term nurturing and caring of the unborn babies finally bear fruit.
  解析:being a mother属于动名词短语做主语,which后接非限制性定语从句,means that后接宾语从句。Milestone里程碑,nurture养育、滋养,bear fruit结果、奏效。
  2. Though I am not a feminist, I suppose it is very necessary for female to take a maternity leave in the wake of delivery.
  解析:though引导让步状语从句, suppose that后接宾语从句,此处省略了that。Feminist男女平等主义者,take a maternity leave休产假, in the wake of随后、紧跟着。
  3. With the maternity leave, mothers can enjoy the professional health care in some well-equipped hospitals or be soundly taken care of by their family, guaranteeing that they can recuperate from this strenuous process soon.
  解析:guaranteeing为现在分词作状语的用法, guarantee that后接宾语从句。Professional health care专业的医疗护理,well-equipped设备良好的,recuperate恢复, strenuous费力的、紧张的。
  4. If women are deprived of the maternity leave, not only their babies cannot be taken care of, but also it leaves an emotional isolation, thereby making the family less closely-knit.
  解析:if引导条件状语从句,be deprived of丧失,emotional isolation情感隔离,thereby making the family less closely-knit为分词作状语的用法。
  5.  it is still likely to bring about the managerial problems to the companies and organizations where they work.
  解析:be likely to do sth可能做某事,managerial problems管理问题,where they work为定语从句。
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